Men In Black [ACCEPTED]

Men In Black

(account deleted) 24 Aug 2018 20:08

http://wayward.wikidot.com/aberrationsandbox:the-meeting

Here’s a thing.

(Thanks to openthetrunk. He helped me a lot on this article and he practically co-wrote this with me.)

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Re: Men In Black

openupthetrunk 24 Aug 2018 20:12

+1 baby, all those edits are worth it. I love the chairman and dane's relationships. the snarky tone is okie too

Re: Men In Black

SonKingKong 25 Aug 2018 01:12

+1 from me. Excellent story told in the logs. A lot of "balance of power" going on, where it shows even a seemingly powerful member of Warder Society can be intimidated and overpowered by a force stronger than him. The concept is also excellent and fitting.

Re: Men In Black

Eon Apocalypse 27 Aug 2018 03:54

seemingly subterranean enviorment

Environment*

Damn good article Dev, I can see a big difference between the first draft of Mothman I read, and this story. Really liked the way you used media to make the article more inmersive, and the comedy is light enough to be funny without making the MIB seem like a walking meme.

The Chairman: So, I have also come here to inquire about the Ap…

Dane: I am going to stop you right there. The answer is no. Even our closest allies can’t know that information.

That little piece of dialogue makes me eager to read more about how The Society and The Bureau interact with each other.

Overall, +1.